I'm not an engineer, but I'm sure one would tell you there's a lot wrong. One remark I got was when someone pointed to the pipes and the engine (the body) and remarked, "That would be a very hot seat. Haha". Lots still to touch up, but thank you so much. <3
I was just about to comment about that and then read what you said. Might work better off to the sides of the tail rather than on top. Other than that, pretty well designed. You should make a series of these things. (Definitely try to do a turtle)
that's a good point. I'd love to continue doing this; after all I do want to be a character/creature designer for games. I'm still not so sure what to do with the 'wires' tucked in the tail and neck. Honestly they are filler. =/ I know the tail and neck would be lifted by gears/hinges, but I didn't know exactly how to approach that idea. Also the feet/claws (which are mainly for tread) are still up in the air as to what or how to make them.
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